Showcase 2022 Choreo Advice

niamma 

Hi everyone!
I've choreographed something for my studio's showcase in May, and I wanted to get some opinions on it. Anything that looks really nice? Any moves that look a little awkward? Something about it gives me beginner vibes and part of that is probably due to the moves I chose, but I still want to have it look more advanced by incorporating more flow/smoother transitions into my movements (and get better at controlling my facial expressions lol).
Video One: [www.studioveena.com]
Video Two: [www.studioveena.com]
I've linked to two videos on my profile. The first one I filmed by myself, so it's flowier in my opinion but you can't see everything (all the extended hand gestures and whatnot). The second one I had someone else film, so you can see everything, but I got nervous so the timing wasn't as good as the first (and more awkward laughter and exclaiming "Sh!t").
Anyways! Was hoping for any constructive criticism so I can do this song justice. Thanks!
I've choreographed something for my studio's showcase in May, and I wanted to get some opinions on it. Anything that looks really nice? Any moves that look a little awkward? Something about it gives me beginner vibes and part of that is probably due to the moves I chose, but I still want to have it look more advanced by incorporating more flow/smoother transitions into my movements (and get better at controlling my facial expressions lol).
Video One: [www.studioveena.com]
Video Two: [www.studioveena.com]
I've linked to two videos on my profile. The first one I filmed by myself, so it's flowier in my opinion but you can't see everything (all the extended hand gestures and whatnot). The second one I had someone else film, so you can see everything, but I got nervous so the timing wasn't as good as the first (and more awkward laughter and exclaiming "Sh!t").
Anyways! Was hoping for any constructive criticism so I can do this song justice. Thanks!
Like Feb 7, 2022

Pole Raven
Lovely work! I really like your musicality and the intro pieces. I think it flows nicely on the whole, just looks like more practice/finessing would polish it off to me. Thanks for sharing!
Like Feb 8, 2022