Hi everyone!

I've choreographed something for my studio's showcase in May, and I wanted to get some opinions on it. Anything that looks really nice? Any moves that look a little awkward? Something about it gives me beginner vibes and part of that is probably due to the moves I chose, but I still want to have it look more advanced by incorporating more flow/smoother transitions into my movements (and get better at controlling my facial expressions lol).

Video One: [www.studioveena.com]

Video Two: [www.studioveena.com]

I've linked to two videos on my profile. The first one I filmed by myself, so it's flowier in my opinion but you can't see everything (all the extended hand gestures and whatnot). The second one I had someone else film, so you can see everything, but I got nervous so the timing wasn't as good as the first (and more awkward laughter and exclaiming "Sh!t").

Anyways! Was hoping for any constructive criticism so I can do this song justice. Thanks!

Nice! I'll take a look tonight :)

Lovely work! I really like your musicality and the intro pieces. I think it flows nicely on the whole, just looks like more practice/finessing would polish it off to me. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks for taking the time to look it over Veena and Pole Raven!

I commtented on the first video, I think. They both looked good though ❤