New video (male)

Hi everyone. I just posted my first video on the StudioVeena site. But there is a sad story behind it! I competed in a talent show last night, and my talent was pole. I won the talent show! But the first half of my winning performance was NOT RECORDED! Bummer... So even though I was already weak, I tried to replicate the performance while my friend recorded. The replica video is too large to post to StudioVeena, but is on YouTube on the StellarMotion channel. I had forgotten my routine in both videos though! One of the biggest differences between the live performance and the afterhours replica was that in the first performance, I wore a black shirt. However, while unbuttoning it in the knee hold, a button got stuck so I just had to rip the shirt and couldn't reuse it for a recording. My energy level is noticeably lower in that vid also, and I didn't have audience energy to borrow from or work off of. Anyhow, hopefully the same thing won't happen when I perform next Wednesday! I'll have a video to show for sure. Please leave constructive criticism on both videos, because I am looking to get better. I already know I have a lot of trouble keeping my legs straight in straddles and ayshas and what-not. That's one of the things I'm going to start focusing on.